2 Responses to Susquehanna (visual edition)

  1. Shawna says:

    “interlaced braided streams brush” … The first two lines immediately tell me this is a love poem. Seeking truth, feeling each other out, unsure, blooming, beauty, bursting with energy and natural flow, romance, fleeting, slipping away, cannot be held, and gone. Just like water.

    Your final two lines are heartbreaking, powerful, and perfect. This is another gorgeous piece, Christi. You are an impressive writer with an unbelievable vocabulary.

  2. Christi Moon says:

    yes, love poem indeed! I find it– more than wonderful that you were able to see past the references to the river/stream… to the essence of this. your compliment means a great deal to me Shawna.

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